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Nabahood23
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Registered: 14/10/09
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    14/10/09 at 11:19 AM
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What is this? A factious crime novel!

 

No, it’s much more than that!

 

She looked at him; he didn’t have a care in the world.

He didn't work because the family gave him money.

Still, he was not happy.

She thought that he really cared about her,

but lately it show more and more that he didn't.

Then the cheating started, but that is just what men do.

But men don’t do this.

 

This may not sound like a just another crime novel - but you will be surprised! There are several characters, one of which is a young woman, 'Nancy’, who grew up abused by her father. She has had a rough life and just when her life is getting better; it suddenly gets even worse! She won't stay out of jail without some help.

 

Mitch took a long look at Nancy.

Hell no he ain’t hit a woman before and he wasn't about to start now.

Nancy needed his help bad,

but what was she going to do to get him to hit her?

She was use to that kind of treatment, growing up with two brothers.

She often got punched and kicked by them.

 Right now she needed Mitch to hit her

so she would not go to jail for killing Del.

 

A crime novel about a brother and sisters plans to take over a ruthless criminal enterprise and develop it into a nation-wide crime network of drugs, sex, murder and much more. It’s quite an excitingly erotic urban crime novel.

 

For a sample chapter, you first must be old enough, it ain't nothing nice. If you are then go to: http://13.websitetoolbox.com/post?id=3719763

 

Please leave me a comment here or there. Let me know what you think because there will be more soon.

 


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